oke probeer nu in engels te gaan dichten!!! maar ooo mijn god mijn nederlands is al behoorlijk slecht, maar mn engels is helemaal wat... ben toch een eind gekomen...
correcties in spelling welkom!!! ik wil voortaan echt in het engels gaan dichten, berijkt meer mensen
My first poem in english. took me 30 minuts. my grammer and english is very bad it should be fixed somehow but the message is clear right
Deep inside we are all one,
when you understand this you are done.
Love is the essence of who we are,
we are not our mind that is at war.
We are experiencing ourselves with the help of our mind,
with it you can hate yourself and others or be kind.
it is a tool to influence yourself and the world around you,
what you give to the world depends on what you do.
hate, blame and judge and your life will be sad,
you will make the world around you mad.
love, respect and honesty will make it peacefull and real,
doing this is not a big deal.
others will probably not want you to change,
and going a differend direction wil feel strange.
you can feel very lonly if you choose this road,
its smart to make yourself an oath.
stick to it whatever it takes,
you wil lose people but they wil be fakes.
start being real and honest in your soul,
now you got yourself a great goal.
if you want this world to be a better place,
you should give yourself some space.
show others how happy you can be,
and others will also start to see
you might inspire them to work on themselves to,
the most important thing is to be true.
cause nothing is more satisfying to live without fear,
and lies create that my dear.
What we are and what we do,
is what the world outside projects to you.
be an example to everyone,
and you will shine as bright as the sun!